Rough Cut Feedback

Verbal Feedback for our Rough Cut:

Audience Member 1:
"I like the style you have aspired to do however you need to make it more apparent that there is a montage before the film opening begins. In addition to this many of the shots need to be edited and colour graded.

Audience Member 2:
"There is no continuity editing and several shots need to be taken again as when the actor opens the door she does not open it wide enough to exit and leave the house thus making the shot non-continuity."

Audience Member 3:
"It is not evident that it is taking place in a police station when she is walking past it. Her costume makes her look as if she is a pedestrian rather than a detective."

Audience Member 4:
"The shot of her on the bench is tilted thus making it look absolutely disgusting. Furthermore, when the actor throws the gun away and disposes of it the gun is not in the shot so how is the audience supposed to know where the gun is being thrown or that she does not want it in the first place. The actor needs to make her facial expressions more evident and personally i believe this shot is significant and needs to be shot again."

Audience Member 5:
"Many more shots need to be added to the beginning to adhere to the conventions of a crime thriller as there is confusion at the moment with the genre."